My birthday
P1 8th birthday
P2 marshmallow game
P3
My birthday
On my 8th birthday we played a game. Which was
Called the MARSHMALLOW game.This is how you play
So someone is in the front and someone throws it.
And and you try and get it in your mouth. I heard people talking to me.I heard them singing happy birthday to me.I felt nervous when they were happy birthday. Well not that nerves.And what cake i had was a chocolate cake with m & m’s. And then my mum took us to the pools for a swim because it was really hot. I heard heaps of splashing and noise.I saw heaps of people at the swimming pools. My mum called out to us to come and have some food.I felt people feeling me
And people was pushing me over in the pool.I tasted my cake and it was yummy.Then we went home
And people was pushing me over in the pool.I tasted my cake and it was yummy.Then we went home
I love your story kamiria.
ReplyDeletemaybe you could put it in parigraphs.